As I walked through the hall I heard a noise thundering through the walls! The I heard a scream behind me I looked and she said something it sounded like a foreige language. She was in a white dress, pointing at me. As I ran through the halls, trying to get away from her, she crawled on the floor like a tiger. It looked like she wanted something. She was only little. It said angel on her dress! I asked her a question but I couldn’t understand her!
Well written work, you convey how frustrating it is when people don’t understand each other.
An interesting interpretation of this week’s prompt. You are missing some commas, sometimes if you are unsure it helps to read your passage through aloud.