Week 32 100wc: Nathan

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One bright sunny day I was on the beautiful coast of Cornwall. I was begging for an Ice cream as it was the hottest day of the year. Minutes later I arrived at the Ice cream shop. I asked the shop keeper for a strawberry with marshmallows. When he asked me for the money some of the words sounded like a foreign language. Will I come here again…?

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  1. Mrs Maclean, Team 100WC

    A good try with this week’s 100WC, Nathan. I think you had an original idea for your writing and I liked that you ended with a question. Maybe next time you could add a little bit more detail to make your writing even better.Keep on writing. 🙂

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